Long-time friend of the site and excellent writer David Henson has sent us a submission for the Sunday Feature – thank you David. The lovely Leila has been the mainstay of this feature for such a long time that it is brilliant to see her with her own Literally Rerun.
“Time and Chance Happeneth to All Gods,” Leila Allison’s story of friendship and impending loss, never hooks or slices as it brings the reader a smile and lump in the throat. It’s one of Leila’s earlier pieces and exemplified the steady stream of quality writing she has provided Literally Stories. Questions for Leila:
Q1: I love the line “Unlucky shadows; fortunate blackberries; and such things contain a special foretelling that heralds the sway of human events.” Do such metaphors as the line refers to typically come to you organically as you’re writing a story?
Q2: The ending works well as is, but tell us: Did Fran make the putt?
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Time and Chance Happeneth to All Gods
Q1: I love the line “Unlucky shadows; fortunate blackberries; and such things contain a special foretelling that heralds the sway of human events.” Do such metaphors as the line refers to typically come to you organically as you’re writing a story?
A1: First thank you David for bringing this back. It is greatly appreciated.
Oddly, for any other character the answer would be yes, they just come about as I go–but not so in the case of “Holly.” He has a highly structured way of thinking of his own invention, so whenever I have to convey his thoughts, I must do so the way he would. Thus there are elements of “luck” and “tells” that are singular to him. It’s mainly OCD gone awry, an attempt to control a world he does not understand–Yet the lucky/unlucky tells he “sees” always come true.
Q2: The ending works well as is, but tell us: Did Fran make the putt?
A: Oh yes. She nailed it. This was a part of a longer related group of works, and at the end, she lived to see Christmas, which was Holly’s “bet”–a connection in which the result of a mundane event is the same as the conclusion of something greater in the future. Hell, after giving Fran “cancer of the everything” I owed her that much.
Thanks again!
Leila
Thanks, Leila. It’s an excellent story. I’m happy to learn that Fran made the putt!
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Thanks again, David!
Leila
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Hi Dave,
Excellent choice, introduction and questions.
I also loved the line that you chose.
Thanks so much my fine friend for this re-run, it is much appreciated!
Leila, cracking story and I’m happy it has peeked out into the world once again!
I was very interested to read that with that character you had to think on the dialogue. That will now make me conscious when I think on dialogue for a character.
…You may have now confused me!!
It’s great to see you have a Re-Run after all the work you have done with this feature!!!
Hugh
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Thank you Hugh
Of course I may have overstated the idea of “thinking” of what a character says. It’s not that analytical, just n the neighborhood of the notion.
Leila
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