Week 68 – A Wee Bit Different

Hi folks!

Just like trying banana on toast with pepper, flat sausage with beetroot and salad cream and of course, tuna, egg mayonnaise and a touch of red sauce, we are doing something a bit different this week for one day only. No, we haven’t diversified into a food site. (Doesn’t ‘Diversifying’ and ‘For one day only’ sound like the demise of Woolworth or a desperation concert from an old singing has-been?)

Anyway, for any avid readers of the site, you will know that Mr Fred Foote has given us many a wonderful tale. Please check out his back catalogue. In fact, check out as many back catalogues as you can, it keeps the stories breathing and the authors proud!!

So just for a change, on Monday, we are going to publish a revision to his ‘Author Part 2’ story. Fred sent this into us and we felt that it was a very clever and satisfying conclusion to his previous version and we wanted to give you all the chance to read it.

With that in mind I thought I would use revision as the inspiration for this post.

I met an old fellow years ago and he told me that he was a writer. Now to be clear, I am not sure if this was true or not. You see, I have met many people who have claimed that they were professional footballers, hitmen, spacemen, artists, famous chefs etc. This doesn’t mean that I am a sophisticated man about town who draws the interesting and beautiful people to me…It just means that I have met some moon units in my time. I hope the old guy wasn’t one! He stated that he had some writing success and he also told me that he was updating some fairy tales with a Scottish slant. That in itself was interesting. If fairy tales aren’t mad enough, having the characters out their faces on Super Lager or heroin would make Mr Disney spin in his grave. Oh, that was the same Mr Disney who made the Brothers Grimm spin in their graves!

Sorry I am getting off point. I was talking to this old fellow and I told him that I couldn’t look back at any of my stories without tinkering. I asked him when you should stop. He told me that anyone who writes stories or poetry would always tinker. He said that perfection was an arrogance that a writer should never have the luxury of. He went onto talk about leaving as is but always expecting to see something no matter when you went back to it. His idea of a deadline was to accept the completion, only to look at it later and want to change the damn thing yet again!

So it is interesting to think that no matter what, once we have got a story to the end, it is the nature of writing that will never allow you to accept that it is finished. I have the same thoughts with a bottle of whisky…I can never accept that it is finished…It makes me sad!!

Now whether or not the fellow was a moon unit was besides the point, I think what he said had some merit and it is something I think on when looking back!

As always, we have had a diverse mix of subjects this week from our growing list of talented authors. Topics such as stages of life, childhood, acceptance, cancer and assassination were all covered in these five excellent stories.

I still haven’t embarrassed any of my fellow editors by publishing their initial thoughts, so here’s hoping for this week!!

Chris Wight sent us his thought provoking, ‘Wake Up Jerry’ which we published on Monday.

‘A really simple story premise but very neatly done.’

‘The style / voice is recognisable / distinct. This is the hardest skill to do in writing.’

On Tuesday we had Steve Sibra’s very memorable, ‘The Dope Shack’.

The story will invade your thoughts every time you have a bottle of beer!

‘A strange coming of age story.’

‘Quirky ideas done in an age appropriate voice’

Jack Coey was next up on Wednesday with his minimalistic stylish offering, ‘Oblique Lines’.

‘It sucked me in and kept me hooked.’

‘I think the style is excellent’

Thursday gave us the very emotional and touching ‘Can I still Work One Day A Week’ from J.W Kash.

‘I think this story will instigate thoughts in whoever reads and these thoughts may be a hundred different points of view.’

‘Briefly told but different enough to tick a bunch of boxes for me.’

And that was just about us. We had the return of an old friend for Friday’s offering. It was so good to see dm gillis back on site. He gave us an action packed story with some very sharp observations in his tale, ‘Little Rules Of Engagement’.

‘Very strong, satirical and sharp.’

‘Great description and good set pieces.’

We thank all these authors for their input.

Well my friends, that is us for Week 68. We are already reading and deciding for Week 69. It is a pleasure and we hope to continually hear from new writers as well as our supportive old guard.

So eat something weird and send us that piece of perfection that you will want to change again and again and again and…


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