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The Battle Below by Bridget Goldschmidt.

In the third year of the Sectarian War, Colonel Childress’ party arrived early to get the best possible position on the rocky outcropping above the weed-choked field. The battle was due to begin at 10 o’clock sharp, according to the colonel’s sources; although retired, he still retained his military contacts. He checked his large silver fob watch.

“I see it’s nearly time …” he said, looking off to see the opposing armies, who were stirring up clouds of dust as they approached from their respective directions.

The members of his party all craned their necks to watch. There were pretty young Miss Haverstraw, with her pleasing embonpoint, along with her dour, black-garbed chaperone; Taylor, an owlish, bespectacled engineer — something to do with earthworks, the colonel thought — and Lucas, a jovial, rubicund wine merchant. They were all his fellow guests at the hotel in town. All had responded with enthusiasm — save the chaperone — to his suggestion that they make a picnic of it while viewing the battle from an advantageous spot. The location he selected was based on information received yesterday evening by messenger.

The escarpment chosen by the colonel was indeed the perfect place for them to observe the engagement unfolding below. They had brought along camp stools for the less limber members of the party and a hamper of cold chicken and sparkling wine packed by the hotel staff to ward off any hunger pangs. The colonel graciously shared his spyglass with the others as the battle got under way in earnest.

The two sides drew up in lines facing one another, their uniforms resplendent in the sun, brass buttons glinting on the coats of the Unitary and Sectarian forces. Orders were called and the lines advanced, little puffs of smoke emanating from their shooting sticks as they moved forward, some soldiers dropping to the ground while others kept going.

The members of the party watched, barely making a sound, as the colonel discussed the strengths and weaknesses of each side and the tactical advantage to be gained by the victor. He was still a fine figure of a man, even if he was now on half pay, with all of his teeth and most of his hair, and he hoped that his form-fitting new waistcoat displayed his physique at its best for the benefit of a certain young lady. She was occupied by what was going on below, however, and did not look at him except to accept the spyglass from him when it was her turn to use it.

In the end, the battle turned out to be indecisive, a draw. The opposing sides carried their wounded from the field. Taylor and Lucas fell upon the cold chicken and Champagne, discussing loudly among themselves what they imagined to be the finer points of warfare, while the chaperone perched on the edge of her camp stool like a great roosting crow and tutted her disapproval of the whole bloody enterprise. The field remained littered with the bodies of the fallen, which would be retrieved under a flag of truce once the mass graves had been dug. Some had been quite torn apart by ammunition, glistening inner organs exposed to the air, blood seeping from mangled bodies into the thirsty ground, heads and limbs in unnatural positions.

Miss Haverstraw held her parasol at a sharp angle to shield herself from the noonday sun. “Are they really dead?” she asked, somewhat in a daze, as though she weren’t sure whether she hadn’t just been watching a particularly gruesome pantomime.

The colonel peered through his spyglass at the scattered corpses below and smiled, glad to impart his expertise on a subject that he knew better than anyone else in the party.

“Most assuredly,” he said.

Bridget Goldschmidt

Image: Viewpoint on a rock outcrop from Pixabay.com

8 thoughts on “The Battle Below by Bridget Goldschmidt.”

  1. Bridget

    War as entertainment should horrify. Rules of engagement involving scheduling and temporary truces should horrify. All my life vI keep hearing about the horrors of war. Well, I no longer believe that people are horrified as much as we say. It’s still going on, by choice, always by choice.

    This captured the foolishness of war and the smaller foolishness of the vain old Colonel. Great work!

    Leila

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  2. Old men and their egos send beautiful people away to die over and over and over. This story is so very well observed and makes strong and valid points which is extra clever in an enthralling read. Great stuff. Thank you. dd

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  3. I’ve read accounts of such ‘picnics’ during the American Civil War and this nicely brings home the absurdity and horror of it all. Well written and effective.

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  4. Bridget,
    The theme of this tale seems to be the awful fact that the world-wide war machine continues to plow on, powered by profit and paranoia, profit first, paranoia second. The way this story seems to take actual facts from the American Civil War and transpose them into another dimension or a different time and place, was totally effective. The collective, sweeping point of view in this story was also effective. Stephen Crane wrote “The Red Badge of Courage” even though he never saw war until after he wrote the novel and had become a war correspondent because of the novel. Hemingway’s famous character tried to make a “farewell to arms.” The way you tackled a big theme in a compressed space makes for an excellent flash; thanks!
    Dale

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  5. Bridget
    I liked how you made no mention of what the battle was about nor what ‘national’ or ‘territorial’ entities the sectarian and unitary forces represented.
    And yes, people don’t have picnics to watch battles anymore. We just serve them up as entertainments in the movies, tv, and on the news 24 hours a day. “Are they really dead?” Not really. Maybe . . .. It doesn’t seem real, does it.
    Your story makes us face these realities and ourselves. Nice job!
    Gerry

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  6. Clever title – the battle is truly below them in their minds and they see no horror in it – only entertainment and another excuse to eat, drink, and be merry. An interesting read and a sad, metaphorical indictment of human behaviour.

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  7. Clever topic. Your point was well-made that, in the past, only the privileged got to watched the blood-letting as detached spectators. Nowadays, with 24-hour news, we can all watch the carnage from our couches. Shameful that it’s made no difference. Hey ho.

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