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Hi Paul,
I think it is an excellent premise of him trying to convey what he wants without saying.
The section on him saying about how his pal stuck up for him regarding the phones being stolen because he knew that he only reacted was sad. We all know people like that and life doesn’t do them any favours. And when you think on it, they are more honest than most.
When you finish the story you really do hope that his friend twigs.
This is really well done and you have cleverly focussed on the unsaid not just in the story but what it is about.
Hugh
Hi Paul,
I think it is an excellent premise of him trying to convey what he wants without saying.
The section on him saying about how his pal stuck up for him regarding the phones being stolen because he knew that he only reacted was sad. We all know people like that and life doesn’t do them any favours. And when you think on it, they are more honest than most.
When you finish the story you really do hope that his friend twigs.
This is really well done and you have cleverly focussed on the unsaid not just in the story but what it is about.
Hugh
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Subtle and affecting. Didn’t “get it” until second time around. My fault. Had to overcome a preconceived notion.
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Thanks for posting thiss
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