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February by Nik Eveleigh

Some days bring sunshine. Some bring rain. And somewhere along the line life settles in hard as a February sky. Locks down your dreams tight against the iron earth and dares you to object. For such a short month it exacts a long toll.

A bunch of scientists did an experiment once with fleas. They took half a dozen of the brightest and bounciest, dropped them in a jar and screwed on the lid. For a couple of days those fleas launched themselves into almost continually. Eventually, through pain or weariness or both, they stopped jumping so high. They settled on a spot two thirds of the way up the sides of the jar and that was their limit. Even after the lid came off and they could have bounded their way to freedom those fleas kept right on jumping to a place well below the potential of possibility.

Maybe I’m being melodramatic but if that leaden February sky ever clears I wonder how high I can still jump.

This is the kind of stuff you think about when you’re lying in a strange bed next to a strange, familiar body listening to the sleet-scattered rain drumming on the sills of a hotel window.

Or at least that’s how it is for me.

“OK. I’m in.” That’s what she said. Written plain on the perfect retina display of a smartphone chat app. Even now I’m twisting it in my mind to convince myself it was her idea all along but I can’t make that leap. This was attrition. This was a well timed attack at a vulnerable moment. This was me at my calculating best.

We’ve been friends forever. Told each other secrets in confidence. Joked about our lives. Commiserated over the moments of mind-numbing tedium and apathy that fill up so many hours of any long term relationship. He takes me for granted. I think I bore her or disappoint her in some way. Got to go the kids are screaming. Mine too, talk soon. Advice occasionally. Laughter worn as a mask more often. Flirtation. Innuendo. Anything to break up the monotony.

“Let’s run away for a weekend. Or a random Wednesday. Yeah, Wednesday is better. We can pretend it’s a work conference or something. Makes it more believable. How about you phone in a bomb threat to my office and I’ll get in the car right now…”

All in fun. Always an undercurrent. A dull, silver thread of maybe.

She feels so good against my skin. I want her to open her eyes and smile. I want her to stay asleep. I’m terrified that if she wakes up our lips will meet and the frantic, shivering exploration of our tongues and bodies of last night will be replaced by something caged and cursory. Something regretful. So I lie there, paralysed and afraid and allow more minutes of my life to tick away unchecked.

A bunch of scientists worked out that over ninety percent of the things that we worry about never actually happen. So if you spend half an hour a day on average worrying about things and you live to your three score and ten you’ll have wasted a whole year worrying about things that never happened. One and a half percent of your life spent on wasted worry. I’m not sure if it’s the same bunch of scientists that worked on the fleas but I suppose that isn’t worth worrying about.


“I didn’t think you’d come.”



“I…never mind. I just thought I’d be the one saying that.” My face is burning but I can’t stop the words spilling out any more than I can stop the sweet, bitter taste of possibility and regret rising to flood my throat. “Actually I didn’t think I’d be saying anything to anyone. Unless you count the waiter and my attempts to get him to leave me to my lonely misery or the manager and my attempts to get a refund on the room or…”

She smiles. I’ll never know if it’s forced but it’s glorious regardless. “Don’t be silly. I said I’d be here.”

I put my arms around her because I don’t trust myself to speak. My fingers twitch against her back as adrenalin thrums through my veins. I hold her for too long. Try to let the awkwardness and doubt fall away from my bones. She breaks away and wraps her hands over mine. “Let’s get a drink.”


Her body shifts against me, burrowing in close. I wonder if she’s dreaming about somewhere else. Maybe her subconscious is convinced she’s in her regular bed next to her regular body in her regular life and is keeping her safely asleep. Whatever the reason I hope the illusion lasts for a while longer.

I don’t want to think about any more scientists, even though I’m sure they’d be able to tell me that seventy six percent of the time a person won’t be woken by someone else’s heartbeat and that no matter how hard I concentrate daylight is eventually going to creep its way into our room, burning away dreams like so much mist and vapour. So I keep on lying there, barely breathing, trying and failing to bend the course of time and reality through sheer will.

At some point my eyes close, and when they open again the day has found us. I run through a succession of words in my mind and find nothing of value. She’ll be awake soon and then she’ll be gone. This time for good. We’ll talk again but it’ll be different. Diluted. We’ll commiserate as we over-compensate with the significant others in our separate lives but it won’t be the same. The weight of impossibility will grind us down. Each day will be a little less than the one that preceded it and so it will go until there’s nothing left to bind us. Until eventually February crushes me in it’s grey palm.



“Can we stay for a bit longer? It’s nice here.”

I say nothing. Draw up the covers. Hold her.

Maybe Spring has finally arrived.


Nik Eveleigh

27 thoughts on “February by Nik Eveleigh”

  1. Strange. I felt a sense of oppression reading this, the idea that by force the lowering of expectations in life results in ambition becoming suppressed. Afraid of change and feeling guilty in a gloomy atmosphere, a ‘winter of discontent’ prevails and we react by clinging onto the little warmth and happiness we have – while we wait for a brighter tomorrow.

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    1. Brilliant and insightful comment as always James. This definitely came from a place of gloom and I think you’ve neatly summarized the mood I was aiming for. Like all seasons, they eventually pass.

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    1. Thanks David – I strive to tell stories in as few words as possible so a comment like “tightly written” means a lot to me. Appreciate you reading and commenting and very glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. ‘And somewhere along the line life settles in hard as a February sky.’ There is such skill in the way you pull the threads through this. Turning and returning. I didn’t want it to stop, can’t we stay for just a little longer too? Please tell me this is more than a one off piece?


    1. Never say never Jac…

      I’ve got a few ideas bubbling around at present and I think this scene and a wider look at the characters involved is a distinct possibility – especially now that I know at least one reader would like to see more!

      Appreciate your support and kind words as always 🙂

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      1. I was reading about the changes in literary style since the last century – how we’re now exposed to such a wide variety of experiences that we no longer need the elaborate descriptions of earlier writers. What you do so beautifully is to create an internal landscape I haven’t experienced.

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      2. That’s such an interesting theory – it does make a lot of sense that we can picture a lot more in the modern world, but if I was able to create somewhere believable in this piece then I’m thrilled.


  3. Wonderful intermingling of intimacy and guilt. It fits my mood. A long time ago I read about a scientific project that studied the psychology of the rodent population in homes (Oh, they’re there). Their nicely, squirrelly, and rattish moods are affected by the general mood of the human inhabitants. I wonder how high their fleas jump.

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    1. I have to credit our dear friend Mr Hugh Cron for suggesting I make the guilt a little more explicit to balance out the intimacy and the possibility. Genuinely thrilled that you enjoyed it, and hanks for taking the time to comment…I’m also now fascinated by how high those fleas jump…

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    1. It’s great to hear that there is some depth and complexity apparent in the story as it’s something I always strive for. I don’t always get things right in terms of story length v complexity but it’s good to know in this case it’s worked for some people at least! Thanks for reading – and great to see a new piece from you on site today 🙂

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  4. Hi Nik,
    Great to see you back on the site.
    The emotion in this story is so strong but beautifully underplayed. (Me and emotion aren’t great companions so Kudos to you for me getting it!!)
    The tension is also there and it has nothing to do with their tryst, it is all about what is still to come.
    As with all of your writing you say so much without mentioning specifics.

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    1. Thanks Hugh – I’ll get back to work on that fantasy romance piece you’ve always wanted me to write haha 🙂 Appreciate the tip to add in an extra line which gave the piece a bit more balance.


  5. Nik: From James Mcgewan, The Perilous Reading Society through to Gwencron, all of the comments sum this story up so wonderfully. My jetliner pace schedule and travels prevent me from commenting as often as I’d like, but I felt the need to take a moment to do so here. You captured the complacency of the main character and his temporary companion very well. Those brief moments of escape can be very revitalizing, though many may also further entrench our problems, like taking a rugged and potentially hazardous back road opposed to the safety of the boring and unintetesting highway we are so accustomed to and familiar with. But the thrill of the adventure however is much worth the risk. There is much more that I could say but I will leave well enough alone. Romantically and emotionally engaging, Nik. And very nicely written, I must add.

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    1. Hi Willie. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment – great to see you back submitting stories. Very glad that this piece engaged you – your thoughts around the complacency of the moment only being a distraction from the further entrenchment of problems are spot on. Really good to hear from you, and thanks for the positive comment!


  6. Lovely to read this poignant, beautifully written piece again. I wonder where they are now. I don’t know which would be better, that they found happiness together, though that would have hurt other people or whether they went back to the tedium and lived the rest of their lives just jumping half way up the jar.

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    1. Hard to say isn’t it? I guess there is never a perfect ending, but if pushed I’d subscribe to the view that you’ll find it impossible to make someone else happy if you yourself are not happy, so maybe outjumping a flea is the way to go.


  7. I dunno, this sounds like not a bad situation here – what they didn’t get with their own families they are getting with each other, and that’s a rare thing. Yes, it’s in secret and it’s based on deception, yet they’re getting what they need and want. The ending is optimistic, “Can I stay for a bit longer?” I like the overall mood and style, and the narrator’s mixed emotions.

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    1. Thanks very much Harrison. I’m pleased that this gets a number of different perspectives – I guess very few moments in life are clearly demarcated into ones and zeros which no doubt played into my feeling that an ending with several possibilities was the route to go. There’s definitely some optimism at the end and I don’t blame them for grabbing the rare moments of happiness. Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.


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