Things are looking up, in a way. He was pissing into a jar in his van home, now he’s in a college dorm mourning lost love. One thing, if he doesn’t take a shower he’ll have another girl in no time. Emily was kind of an anomaly. Maybe the longer the curse takes to kick in, the more he loves the girl. I should have such a curse. Funny story, eccentric characters. I like the manic pace of the story.
Hi Matt,
The tone of this is excellent.
You are just happy to go along with his story.
I loved the line: ‘It took three years of begging and persistence for the curse to finally kick in with her.’
I enjoyed this!
Hugh
literally stories 
Meandering fun. Likeable MC, but he displays symptoms of syphilic dementia, or maybe he’s just in love.
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Things are looking up, in a way. He was pissing into a jar in his van home, now he’s in a college dorm mourning lost love. One thing, if he doesn’t take a shower he’ll have another girl in no time. Emily was kind of an anomaly. Maybe the longer the curse takes to kick in, the more he loves the girl. I should have such a curse. Funny story, eccentric characters. I like the manic pace of the story.
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Hi Matt,
The tone of this is excellent.
You are just happy to go along with his story.
I loved the line: ‘It took three years of begging and persistence for the curse to finally kick in with her.’
I enjoyed this!
Hugh
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