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  1. Things are looking up, in a way. He was pissing into a jar in his van home, now he’s in a college dorm mourning lost love. One thing, if he doesn’t take a shower he’ll have another girl in no time. Emily was kind of an anomaly. Maybe the longer the curse takes to kick in, the more he loves the girl. I should have such a curse. Funny story, eccentric characters. I like the manic pace of the story.


  2. Hi Matt,
    The tone of this is excellent.
    You are just happy to go along with his story.
    I loved the line: ‘It took three years of begging and persistence for the curse to finally kick in with her.’
    I enjoyed this!


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