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Chrome and Marrow by Maudie Bryant

The metallic aftertaste of recycled oxygen lingered in my throat, each breath a sweltering struggle to survive. I tracked the merciless white sun as dust devils spun in the distance. Their swirling forms juxtaposed against the still figures before me.

Elder Willow, her bronzed face etched by countless cruel summers, stood her ground. Witness to the land’s decline and the rise of the oppressive regime, her eyes were still determined. She held memories of lush fields and thriving hives, a stark contrast to the desolation before us. She was a stone against a sandstorm. Her tattered robes, faded like sunbaked clay, fluttered in the absence of any breeze.

Opposed to her, encased in a polished chrome exosuit, stood a representative of the government. With features hidden behind a mirrored visor, his expression reflected the desolate landscape. The only sound to break the oppressive silence was the steady hum from his armor.

“One last chance, Acolyte.” His voice, amplified and distorted by the suit’s speakers, boomed across the valley. “Surrender the hives, and we will guarantee the survival of your… community.”

“We cannot survive without balance,” Willow’s voice, though aged, carried the weight of history. “The honey sustains us and the bees. It is more than sustenance; it is the lifeblood of the land.”

“Lifeblood?” A metallic sneer escaped the envoy’s helmet, “How quaint, considering your archaic ways. We have mastered synth pollination, a marvel of modern efficiency. Honey is a relic, a nostalgic indulgence that your people cling to in vain. Think of what we offer: not bare survival, but stability. Your traditions have value, but they cannot feed a future.”

A cough escaped my lips, rasping like wind against dry earth. His words itched my insides, a truth as undeniable as bleached bones scattered across the desert. A truth robbing our world of life. Although synthetic food kept humanity from starving, it offered nothing for the soul. I didn’t know how many more visits we could handle.

“Stability? Or control? What you offer lacks the spirit that makes life worth living. Honey is the promise of renewal in a world that your machines can never replicate.” I said, repeating the teachings in hope of reasoning with the stranger.

Willow lifted a gnarled hand to silence me. Her eyes flickered to the weathered huts huddled behind us. Home. A refuge for the last survivors of the Apiarist Order, the sect I swore to serve upon completing my training. We followed the sacred covenant of the bees, a bond forged generations ago, promising mutual survival and the balance of the land. This covenant was not just a tradition, but a living testament to our faith in nature’s wisdom. A pledge to maintain the harmony that once allowed our planet to thrive.

From the corner of my eye, I saw Ezra, not yet ten summers old, burst from the sheltering huts. His wide eyes betrayed the honeycomb he’d clearly snuck moments before. A collective gasp escaped the onlookers as all eyes darted towards the boy, his diminutive figure a small speck in the open atmosphere. My heart pounded as I realized he ran to danger, clutching the honeycomb like a beacon of innocence. The small respirator clipped to his septum glinted in the harsh sunlight. A distant hum permeated the air, a low tremor that spread shivers through my flesh.

The envoy’s visor flashed as it swiveled at the boy. “Ah, so this is where you store the product.”

A flicker of anger ignited in Willow’s eyes, momentarily chasing away the weariness etched into her face. With a swiftness that belied her age, she snatched the honeycomb from Ezra’s grasp. My attention followed the golden surface catching the sun as she held it aloft like a sacred chalice.

“This,” Willow’s voice rang out, clear and unwavering, “is not a product. It is life. It is the promise of a renewed world.”

“Is it worth risking everything for a tradition? Think of the children, of their future.” The envoy motioned at Ezra, hiding behind Willow’s robes.

“I am. A future without roots is no future at all. The children need the bees, just as the bees need us.” Willow replied.

The air crackled with a tension as true as dust. When the envoy’s metal hand twitched towards a concealed weapon at his hip, the onlookers sucked in a synchronized breath. Then, a dark cloud materialized on the horizon, swelling with an ominous speed. The wasteland suddenly vibrated with an intense thrum that sang in my marrow. It wasn’t a mere dust devil, but a living, breathing storm— a seething mass of bees, their unified roar shaking the ground.

The envoy staggered back, his chromed form dwarfed by the approaching tempest. Even from this range, I could feel the primal energy pulsing from the amassed fury, awakened. The envoy turned to run, but the die had been cast. The swarm engulfed him, a buzzing shroud of fluttering wings and stinging wrath. Their unrelenting drone drowned his anguished cries.

When the dust settled, the envoy was gone, leaving behind only bones in the shell of his armor. The earth turned crimson where it welcomed each drop missed by the bees. Willow lowered the honeycomb with trembling hands. She met my gaze, a silent understanding passing between us.

Ezra, tears glistening on his cheeks, clutched at Willow’s robes. “Grandmother, the bees… are they angry?”

Willow passed the honeycomb back to the boy, then faced the horizon where the swarm faded into the distance. “They’re our guardians, Ezra. They remind us of what we’ve lost, of the sacred pact between all things.”

Listening to the final echoes of the throng, I dragged the remains of the suit towards the makeshift forge. As the clang of metal resounded against the scorched earth, its hollow finality served a grim reminder. This battle was not only for our immediate survival but for the enduring struggle to carve out a sweet place on a dying planet.

Maudie Bryant

Image – Extreme close up of a bee. Just his eyes and a hint of bee yellow against a black background. pixabay.com

10 thoughts on “Chrome and Marrow by Maudie Bryant”

  1. Maudie

    I believe if we ever meet an ET smart enough to invent a tech society that hasn’t been ruined by greed we will also discover millions of other necessary creatures on their world still thriving. Nearly all life forms serve a purpose; I cannot envision a mono-life planet. But we keep saying “yeah, yeah, I know, I know” and keep taking more than we return. Well done. I’m sure it will cause a positive buzz. (Yeah, yeah, I know, I know, lame jokes are not a sustainable resource.)

    Leila

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  2. An atmospheric description of a bleak stand-off, although I expected death by bee sting rather than a devouring! Still, a strong end to the week.

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  3. There are so many comments from politicians and the like about how we ‘must do something’ and ‘will act now’ and yet, nothing much seems to happen universally. Every creature, I would suggest, is necessary and precious – even slugs and mosquitos and we upset the balance at our peril I think. This was a well written very readable story with a strong and meaningful message. Good stuff – thank you – dd

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    1. I pondered about the value of mosquitos at one time, then I realized, or someone explained to me, they feed fish, birds, and bats.
      My editor is something of a slug expert. They are the garbagemen of the forest. They eat feces for one thing. Glad someone else got the job.

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  4. Maudie

    I enjoyed the thought-provoking nature of this fable about indigenous wisdom being projected into the future. Over the last decades, science has discovered the existence of the “tipping point,” which is as sure as gravity or water being H2O. After a certain point, there’s no going back, and things are sure to get rapidly worse, with no course correction possible or available. (No one knows where that point is exactly, and it will come as a vast surprise.) Since less than one half of one percent of the global population holds more than half of global wealth, from China and India to the USA and everywhere in between, the problem of global warming, human hunger, and lack of water resources could be solved within six months right now if humanity only had the will to act, not to mention slowing the rate of species extinction from its current horrific pace. Maybe this is what T.S. Eliot meant when he said the world will end not with a bang but a whimper. Indifference from all sectors, not just the billionaires and politicians, may be what we’re up against. Your story also shows that hope springs eternal, which is what Emily Dickinson believed. May all the animals rise up in a great swarm to show us very clearly what we are doing to the only home humanity will ever have. (Anything that can survive and live a life in space will be something other than human, maybe a half human, half machine combo that needs another species name: if this isn’t only another pipe dream.) Thanks again for a thought-provoking narrative.

    Dale

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  5. That “buzzing shroud” grows ever louder with every reading! – as do the anguished cries beneath it. So taut & precise, every line pulsating.

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  6. My unpopular opinion turned into “Reprieve”, a pandemic story in 2025 before it was cool. If a disease killed say 90% of the human population there would be the necessity and the practicality of a reset and a game change, and future for all of the living things on the planet.

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  7. I liked this very much. The bees depicted in such a fragile yet powerful way made me sad and happy for their revenge. I say to the oil slick of our world let it be green, please.

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