“We were just here,” said Ned. “Why do we have to visit so often?”
“It’s been a whole year.” Emma took his arm. “Some folks do this a lot more often than that.”
The two of them shuffled slowly into the cemetery. Heavy iron gates flanked the entrance; rust deep in the joints thwarting the original purpose of keeping the residents on their respective sides of the wall. Just inside the entrance, the first mausoleum rose from amongst the swirling dried leaves, a gothic castle in miniature.
“Why do you suppose they like it here?” he asked.
She turned and smiled at him, but her eyes reflected only sadness. “This is where we always see them.”
“I’d think they’d want to meet at the old homestead.” Holiday decorations, a table full of food, and a hubbub of laughter and conversations rushed in to fill his memories. “We should take a trip there ourselves.”
“But…sure.” Emma looked down, studying the path just ahead of them. “Let’s talk about that later.”
They continued past a row of larger gravestones, some of them majestic monuments to forever commemorate entire families, others toppled and broken, forgotten names now pressed face down in the dirt. Farther back, the stones grew smaller, less ostentatious. They stopped in front of two markers mounted flush with the ground, indistinguishable from the rest.
Ned shook his head. “I don’t think this is the right spot. Isn’t it a few more rows over?”
She knelt down, fingertips brushing away the debris that covered the slabs. “This is the place.”
Still not convinced, he tried to read the carved names, but couldn’t quite focus on the letters.
She turned to her left. “They’re coming.”
He looked in the direction that held Emma’s gaze, seeing nothing but grey skies forming a background to the neat rows of distant memorials. When he turned back to Emma, she was smiling.
“Are they here?” he asked.
She nodded her assent, her face aglow.
“I wish they’d speak up.” He turned to face the same direction as her, wishing he could capture some of the same reverence she displayed. “Even if I can’t see them, once or twice I think I’ve heard them.”
“Shh,” she said. “Maybe you’ll hear better if you just hush for a minute.”
Ned strained to listen. He recalled other times when he and Emma had visited cemeteries and the sound had been constant: cars crunching gravel as they crept past, teen-agers giggling as they partied behind the crypts, birds and squirrels chattering amongst the trees. Now none of those disturbed the near-perfect stillness.
“Anything?” he asked with a shrug. He could see Emma’s lips moving, but she made no sound to disturb the silence.
She turned to him, eyes sparkling. “They say they’re sorry.”
“Sorry? Sorry for what?”
“For being so busy. For not getting here more often.”
He laughed. “What have they got to do all day to keep them so busy? Compared to you and me—”
She laid a finger across his lips.
And just for a moment, he saw something. A shimmer of color in an otherwise monochrome day, a ripple of movement against a stationary backdrop. It was gone a moment later.
“How long have they been gone now?” His voice was barely above a whisper.
Emma’s shoulders slumped, and she stared sadly at him.
I should remember, he thought. And at the very least, I shouldn’t admit that I don’t remember. Not to her. He shook his head, trying to clear the cobwebs that seemed to have taken up permanent residence.
She took his hand and squeezed it. Without a word, the two of them turned back toward the entrance.
“It’s not them,” she replied as they walked, “who are gone.”
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Kurt
Great to see this up. The perspective was so carefully chosen that the reveal was well protected.
Excellent.
Leila
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Thank you Leila – I’m so glad you enjoyed this tale!
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Very cleverly done and layered. Some great descriptions throughout also: “the joints thwarting the original purpose” and “majestic monuments to forever commemorate entire families” are just two examples which stood out for me. There was also a playful nature in the tone which I enjoyed very much.
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Thanks for your kind words, Paul. I’m currently working on the first draft of a novel and thinking at times that I have no ability to write descriptions of any sort. Your remarks have reminded me of what I am sometimes capable of.
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Hi Kurt,
Not sure if this was a reverse ghost story??
But that is what makes this clever!!!
All the very best my fine friend.
Hugh
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Hugh,
I’m glad you enjoyed the story, and yes – I did try to reverse the living and the dead here 🙂
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Wonderful surprise ending that wasn’t telegraphed yet didn’t seem gimmicky. Nicely done.
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David,
I’m glad you enjoyed it – and thank you for sharing that with me.
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Great story. Had me fooled until the last sentence!
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Thank you – I’m glad you enjoyed the twist!
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I enjoyed the dream-like quality of this very fine story.
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I suspect there may be more than a passing resemblance between dreaming and death – I’m happy that you enjoyed my working that in.
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Very nice, Kurt. It transported me from this hot summer to my favorite time of year. The ending? Perfect!
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It did seem fitting that this tale got published during the hottest week of the year – it had that cooling effect on me also! I’m glad you liked it.
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Wonderful story with a superb ending.
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Thank you! I’m delighted that you enjoyed the tale.
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