All Stories, Literally Reruns

Literally Reruns – The Witch by Dallas Yates

And another great choice by Joy.

I love a good witch story, and this was an original take on what we already know. The first line of this piece perfectly sets the tone: ‘I burned a witch to death last night.’ The story is rounded off nicely with the final line ‘Witches cremate nicely.’,so much that I feel like it could have also been the second line of the piece, but it definitely wouldn’t have had the same effect.

The build-up of this piece is done brilliantly: The description of the messy garden (‘thick vines and thorny bushes’) and how animals get trapped, going over into facts on how to recognise witches and the types. They set a certain mood that led me to expect to see the word ‘witch hunt’ or ‘hunter’ at any moment. But that moment never came, because why would hunting witches be the only reason for burning them, right?

Hugh commented: ‘I couldn’t get out my head that he was a sort of ‘Dignitas’ for witches.’ which I really loved. What exactly is happening in the story, perhaps only the narrator and the witches themselves will ever know. After reading the story I found myself Googling: ‘Are witches immortal?’ to which the first answer on Reddit was: ‘Your world, your rules.’ Gosh, perhaps we should stop asking ourselves ‘How can we kill the witch?’ instead of asking the witch ‘How are you coping with knowing you will not face a natural death, but the only option you have is for your body to be set on fire?’ and ‘Are you okay? …Would you like to talk about it?’

Questions for the author:

Q. I have to ask. Do you see witches as beings who cannot die from natural causes? (Or more particularly in the universe of your story?)

Q. The casualness of the narrator towards what happens makes the story all the more curious. Do you think the narrator ever felt anything besides fascination about the burning of the witch?

Joy Florentine

***

The Witch

2 thoughts on “Literally Reruns – The Witch by Dallas Yates”

  1. Hi Joy,
    Excellent introduction and thanks so much for the wee mention!
    I don’t think we had any more contact from Dallas after this story, which is a pity.
    I do like the classic horror topics but the problem is they are classics. Unfortunately they have been bastardised by so much YA angst content which has ruined them lately.
    This story is an example on how to take something well known and just tweak it and change into something recognisable but new.
    Before all this ‘Twilight’ and all it’s offshoot nonsense there was a book by Ray Garton called ‘Live Girls’. It was published mid 1980’s. (I think) It was the first book that looked at the whole vampire legend from the POV of the vampire. I thought it was brilliant and unique. And then along came marketing and teenagers involvement and those old legends are now more hormone driven than much about the hunger!
    Hugh

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.